User: tarynheart
Title: tattered solace.
First Impression ( 5/5) What a beautifully mellow layout and very neat and tidy diary…
Content ( 25/25) Your diary is seriously good, on an emotional level. You write really well, you write so freely, I wish that I could write as well as you. It seems that you aren’t afraid to write what you want and I really admire that. I struggle so much to write so honestly and so you’re diary has captured me. I should be doing other things but I just keep reading entry upon entry of yours, I think I might come back in the future. I think you also have a sort of lyrical quality about you. I don’t mean you like write rhyming style or anything, but some random sentences really remind me of songs, well the style and I really like that. For instance… “i am in such a good mood today. i feel like being me” “just because you aren't happy doesn't mean you should try to bring me down with you.” really stuck in my head. I guess I really like your diary so much because I can relate to most of it, but if I wasn’t judging it personally I still think you have a very good and emotive style of writing. You also update which is good and your entries are very constant. I don’t think I can really fault it. If you want any criticisms just ask…but I don’t think I have any.
Layout & Color s ( 17/20) I think your layout is really nice. The image is very very well made, even though you didn’t make it! Hmmm… The colours all work together very well and it’s a very professional layout.
Navigation ( 9/10) Very organised, really good, I like the way your links are just quietly lurking at the bottom not a huge great box or anything. Though you don’t have a link to your profile, but maybe you just don’t want one!!!
Link ( 5/5) Yay you did!
Grammar and Punctuation ( 15/15) Really good grammer, im very impressed with the amount of people I’m seeing who don’t write like this “2dai I wnt out wid me m8s 2 c me ova m8s” Punctuation is good too, and you write really well.
Extras ( 15/15) You have lots of extras and they’re all very cool, you’re keeping a really good diary here! I really really really like the soundtrack, full marks just for that because its so original! HAHA the 50 facts… 50. when i have kids, if i have a boy, I’m going to cry. That made me laugh!!! (I want girls, boys are stinky :P) Ooooh and I like the whole lyrics for your cast, I really like your diary a lot. I also love your poetry diary…
Image? (+ /5) Well I did find one on your photo thing in extras :) so that’s ok.
Creativity ( 8/8) You are really really creative as far as I can see, Its been so much fun exploring your diary. Your choice of layout is great and your way with words is very creative in itself. Your list of extras is really original and I love it.
Contact ( 4/5) You got email, notes, aim, yim and msn, but no guestbook I see :(
Profile ( 5/10) Hmmm, well I found your profile, but I guess because you don’t have a link you don’t really want people to see it? You got a bit of info on there but not major, most of your info is in your diary.
Will I Return? ( /1212) Yes I really will return, lots.
Total points: ( 120/130) +5 = 125/130
Reviewed By: Helen