User: rfb-rules
Title: Rachelle’s Ultimate Blog: Where wings take dream!

First Impression (4/5)
Just your average banger’s diary... wait, is there such a thing?

Content (13/25)
Congrats on the Trash Award!
I really enjoy your writing. Your crazy slang is the shit. Lol. You have great points as well. I can understand where you are coming from and it’s nice to find out someone has the same views as you. We have lots in common and that’s a plus for fantastic. You write about important issues and unimportant facts. I’m not sure how I feel about this, but I’m going to say it’s peachy. There are some cases where I didn’t understand what you meant or could make any since of it all. I don’t particularly like being confused. I’ll forgive you this time...lol. I also adore your love for music. That’s the best part! It’s awesome that you play the guitar and bass. I play bass and drums. WOW (lol). Ok, moving on...

Layout & Colors (7/20)
Robin Black is where it’s at, huh? Interesting. Well, I’d like to start by saying that I’m not too fond of the layout. No offence to Robin Black or anything. It just seems so self-made, and that’s fine. However, I’d like to see something self-made that didn’t seem so self-made. Am I making since? I can never be sure. It’s awesome that you even attempted to make your own layout, therefore I’ll throw some courtesy points at cha. You also give off a little obsession with Mr. Black, what with the layout the content and the username. I can’t say I hate it, but it does annoy. Since I’ve been there too, I’ll over look it. There’s not much else that can be said.

Navigation (3/10)
Again there’s not too much to your diary. You have a few extra links to your other sites, the archives, current entry link, then profile and email. I am a little disappointed by this. You use sub categories which I favor.

Link (5/5)
You’ve posted payment, thanks!

Grammar and Punctuation (8/15)
Grammar is good... I guess, but the punctuation need work.

Extras (4/15)
Two site links.

Image? (+5/5)
Yep. Good job.

Creativity (5/8)
Maybe that’s just how you guys talk, but I’ve never been more entertained with words in all my life. You really have some clever slang there, missy. I enjoyed ever minute of your diary. I’d say you’re quite creative.

Contact (4/5)
Email, Yahoo, AOL, and MSN screen names.

Profile (10/10)
I like that your profile title is the same as your diary title. I do the same. You really have amazing character! I love that your describe yourself as “the cat’s pajamas” - lol. Simply incredible. All though you don’t mention the important details you still give off your personality with what you’ve posted and I think that’s great! You have plenty of favorite and a good amount of comments to boot. So we’re done here. Great job!

Will I Return? (10/12)
I might. You have nice character about you. I can always go for that.

Total points: ( 73+5=78/130)

Reviewed By: Hayli