User: i-wont-dance

Title: stuck in america..well not really.

First Impression ( 4/5)
I like your layout, its kinda inspired me to make some nifty ones! Anyway, you seem preety cool and I think this will be an interesting read!

Content ( 23/25)
I like you. You seem happy and comfortable writing in your diary, so I am comfortable reading it. You write a lot and I don’t think any two entries are the same. I like the way you write, it feels like I want to finish one entry so I can get onto the next. You don’t bore me, you vary things, not every entry is deep and meaningful, but you don’t have a lot of meaningless hyped entries. Which is a good balance. I like to know about peoples lives, especially when the person I’m reading doesn’t just constantly tell us of their BFF or OMG I hate him, her, it, she, he…So I like your diary, I like variety.

Layout & Color s ( 14/20)
I like this layout, maybe needs a little more colour? Maybe that’s just cos I’m a colour whore! Anyway, its preety and neat!

Navigation ( 9/10)
It seems preety organised to me!

Link ( 5/5)
Yus…payment…better than last time! Good good!

Grammar and Punctuation ( 14/15)
Good grammar, nothing much wrong at all!

Extras ( 12/15)
Yes cool extras! Well on your website you have lots of stuff, which cos there’s a link to it on your diary counts as an extra!

Image? (+ /5)
Yep I see on right down in the corner! Good good more points for you!

Creativity ( 6/8)
On the content front, you’re very creative, maybe not so much on extras and cool stuff that nobody else has, but no biggie! And like in your last review…I like how you don’t whine all the time, its good and different! Ha!!!

Contact ( 3/5)
Notes, Email, aim in profile…

Profile ( 9/10)
Nice intro to yourself! Nice list of music and films, with good descriptions for each! Cool profile!

Will I Return? ( 9/12)
I might do, maybe I will to see when you update!

Total points: ( 113/130)

Re-reviewed By: Helen