User: i-wont-dance

Title: PaulaLubsBenjimin<3

First Impression (3/5)
The layout looks to be of a thirteen year old. Oh, you’re fourteen....well.

Content (24/25)

From the looks of your content, I think you live a pretty exciting life. You seem really down to earth and I really like your punk-rawk, kiss-my-ass-attitude. I especially enjoyed this entry. The msn chick (aka, Crazy Horse Girl) sounds like a jackass. I just hope she was listening to the radio. Your “nineties ruled, face it” entry was quite entertaining as well. The only problem is the eighties kicked-ass! I don’t know what it is about your writing that fascinates me so. Sure it has it’s flaws, but you’re so to the point in a nonchalant way. Every entry is about something different and I like that. We share the same passion for music and that's what I love the most! I’d say your only problem is you tend to be a little juvenile.

Layout & Colors (10/20)
As far as the colors, I like the green and purple. The layout is another story. It expresses your age well. Perhaps that’s what I dislike most. Although it may be the set up that annoys me. I’m not sure. I’m also not keen on the whole “I love Benjamin!” deal. You don’t have to post it in every nook and cranny you find for us to know that. Just tone that down a bit.

Navigation (3/10)
There’s a problem with your notes & profile links. You have one - it works - however, you don’t have your notes page turned on and your profile isn’t set up. Why post a link to the pages if there’s no point? You should either take these down or fix the pages. It was a real disappointment. The only other links include new, old, email, and diaryland. I’d say from the looks of your navigation, your diary is pretty boring other than the content.

Link (0/5)
No payment! I can’t believe you!

Grammar and Punctuation (14/15)
There are a few typos. But not enough to get upset about. Your use standard grammar and punctuation. Just be sure to read over your entries before you post.

Extras (0/15)
None :(

Image? (+0/5)

Nope, but not to worry. This wont take away from your score, it only adds to it!

Creativity (8/8)
I must say your entries are most definitely a cool breeze of variety and creativity. I can tell you're a fun person to be around! I am so used to reading depressing diaries. Sure you have your moments, but your not whiney throughout your entire diary. That’s an awesome quality! Remember that.

Contact (2/5)
Just email and an AOL screen name(in profile). I would give you another point, only someone’s notes are turned off...hum?

Profile (7/10)
I managed to find your profile. I only had to manually type it in!

Your profile title is interesting. I don’t exactly know what to make of it. Is it suppose to be something catchy or were you simply responding to the question when your were editing? Either way you cut it, I think I like it. Your short autobio aka profile deception is right on track. It tells me what I need to know. Well, pretty much everything except that you love benjamin to death. I could already tell by your diary title, layout and the “about moi” section. Must you include that in your bio as well? I guess if you must...you must. However, I don’t like the fact that you feel you must repeat yourself. I see you have a healthy list of favorites along with a nice amount of comments. It’s always helpful to know “why”, right? Over all, I must say you did a good job.

Will I Return? (12/12)
Sure. You may lack the extra material, but I think your personality rocks and it surly shows in your content!

Total points: (83/130)

Reviewed By: Hayli