User: ifiwere
Title: Walking Through The Spiderwebs

First Impression (no points)
Your layout is plain and simple. I’m not sure if this is a bad thing or not. I like that it includes hot pink though.

Content (23/25)
From the ten entries I read I can tell you have passion in your writing. When I read I can understand how you feel when it comes to the many situations. Your topic of choice is usually interesting. However, I didn’t like the fact that you lack so much detail in a few entries, such as “fuckness” and “right were it hurts”. To me it just seems that you wanted to write, but didn’t have anything to say. It may be personal and the reader isn’t supposed to know what it means, but why post an entry like that on an online diary?

Layout (16/20)
It’s a little bit too plain for my taste, however I do like the pink and because it’s from Velvet Designs, I am going to throw in a charitable amount of points.

Navigation (8/10)
Just like any other Velvet Design template, the navigation lacks capitols and separate categories. Don’t worry, I am currently using a Velvet design and my navigation is the same. This wont take away from your score. There is a link titled "Devaintart" that doesn't work. It sends me to a search engine. Check the url.

Link(5/5)
You’ve posted payment...

Grammar and Punctuation (8/10)
You use it every now and then. It doesn’t seem to be an importance to you. I find that a little annoying. I am a perfectionist, so I think it’s always proper to use this in writing.

Extras (2/10)
I can see that you tried -

Contact (4/10)
Notes(2) and Email(4). You lack a guest book(6), messenger screen name(8) and notify list(10).

Profile (7/10)
I like your profile title “aim for my heart and you wont need a gun”. It’s almost sweet, but definitely catchy and charming. Your profile description (which usually in most aren’t even descriptions of the profile, but rather a lyric bio or poem) intertwines with the title as well. You have a generous amount of favorite diaries, but you fail to include any other favorites. Listing your favorite music, movies, and authors play an important part when it comes to getting to know you. Over all, the title and description are about the only things here that tell me about YOU, which is the whole point of a profile.

Total points: (73/100)
Reviewed By: Hayli