User: grayinside
Title: sullen girl...

First Impression (3/5)
I like the layout that I saw at first. The white was a little plain but Its good.

Content (20/25)
I like what you have to say. You pretty much keep it short and sweet but get your point across. You put your real thoughts into it.

Layout & Colors (12/20)
Your layout should show who you are. It should portray your personality. If you like the plain white with little kid scribble.. Then you do. I like the sort of pointless smartass comment. Good.

Navigation (8/10)
You have all your things displayed clearly and everything is easy to recognize.

Link (3/5)
I don’t really see a link to the reviewers page lol but I wont take that out on you.

Grammar and Punctuation (11/15)
Your punctuation isn’t the best I have seen but it’s also not the worst. You sort of break up your sentences. I understand, though, diaries are a place for thoughts not perfection, so its alright.

Extras (10/15)
I see the link but I don’t see it working. Nice try though!

Image? (+ 5/5)
You have extra images. Thats a big bonus, even if they are stupid, images are images. (Not saying yours were)

Creativity (5/8)
I’m not really seeing much creativity. Maybe that IS your creativity is simplicity. But this is supposed to be MY opinion.. It could be better. (no offense)
Contact (5/5)
You have your e-mail. That’s just about the best contact other than your phone number. Good job girlie!

Profile (7/10)
You have things you like but you don’t put anything to it. You leave a plain answer. Your diary matches your profile. It doesn’t explain YOU, though.

Will I Return? (`10/12)
I’ll return. Your entries let me know how your really feeling. I like that.

Total points: ( 94/130)

Reviewed By: Melody