fr3nzy [June 22, 2005]

User: fr3nzy
Title: ...a wishful flower


First Impression (5/5)
Elegant layout. You seem to be really organized. I like “The Journey” as well...


Content (23/25)
I love that your older entries are nicely organized by months. I believe you to be fragile in a sense. This isn’t a flaw of any kind. Your writing reflects your pain in many areas. I rarely read an entry that portrayed happiness. There were a few. However you are a very interesting person. I find that your strongest feature. Your entries keep me reading one after the other. It’s also nice to know that you don’t dwell on depression.


Layout & Colors (17/20)
Layout is in some ways boring to me, but I like that it’s not too busy at the same time. I love the flower and that everything is organized. The thing about organization is that it helps the reader feel that your care and are dedicated to your diary and the reader as well. The colors are nice. I love the grey with the bright green. It helps the flower pop. Come to think I almost used this same layout from Francey Designs.

Navigation (8/10)
Well organized, but with little for the reader to snoop through. However this is a locked diary and there really isn’t a need for too many extras. I understand that you too know this. That’s why I like that you at least posted links and a cast page.


Link (5/5)
You’ve posted payment. Thanks!


Grammar and Punctuation (15/15)
You use proper punctuation and great grammar skills.

Extras (7/15)
A tag board is a definite plus. The only others are your imood, links and cast.


Image? (+0/5)
None that I can see.


Creativity (3/8)
Your writing style is in it’s own way creative. However it’s temporary and pleasant. I see this with many diaries. It’s not a bad thing, only not very original.


Contact (2/5)
Only a tag board.


Profile (8/10)
Being that diary-x doesn’t support and profile feature its mighty nice of you to create your own. For that your get half credit! You go in depth when it comes to explaining yourself. You posted just enough information to get to know you.

Will I Return? (12/12)
You have a nice diary going. You have wonderful views and a great way of putting your ideas. I love your writing style. Of course!

Total points: (105/130)

Reviewed By: Hayli

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