Username: for-you-only

Title: Fallen Into Shadow

First Impression ( 3/5)
Well I must admit I have come across your diary before and I used to read it regular! Anyway…Your layout seems really dark and I can’t see any navigation?!? Oooh wait I found it…

Content ( 23/25)
Well I started to write this review a while ago, then I had to go blah blah and from when I came back I’ve been engrossed in your diary again for about an hour. Its so addictive to read and you write so freely. Its hard to not want to read about your life and I genuinely enjoy your writing. Your art is also pretty good! I’m not going to judge on the content of your entries as far as topic goes because I have no right, but you write well and I like reading it.

Layout & Color s ( 17/20)
Well its really good to see that you made your layout yourself, its really nice cos nobody tends to make their own anymore (not that I mind, they use mine!!!) Lol anyway, I think it reflects you pretty well and it works with your diary. The dark colour scheme looks good too.

Navigation ( 7/10)
Well even though its not on you home diary page having a clear link (well once I found it) to a page of navigation is quite a good idea because you have a lot of links! Though maybe a link to older pages could be helpful on the actual diary page? Well that’s just me cos I needed to see a list!

Link ( 5/5)
Yay you linked us, with my preety button too!

Grammar and Punctuation ( 15/15)
You have perfect grammar and punctuation as far as I can see, and that’s good enough for me!

Extras ( 15/15)
I don’t think you could get anymore extras! I’m not going to make a list of the ones you have cos I’m sure you’re fully aware! I like all the extras, its more like your site then, not just a diary with ramble about you, we can get to know you and the people in your life, I must admit I didn’t really get round to reading you diary earlier because I found so much interesting stuff to click on!

Image? (+ /5)
Yep lots of them…

Creativity ( 7/8)
You seem really creative, I must admit im not too keen on the layout but you made it so that’s creative on your part, the odd poem I see of yours are good and your art is really creative, so yes you defiantly are!

Contact ( 4/5)
Notes, email, book, comments…I don’t see any tagboard here but I know you used to have one… Profile ( 8/10)
You have a pretty long profile with a lot of links to peoples diaries and your other ones, cool description of yourself before we enter your diary and even a photo. Nice lists of music and films too.

Will I Return? ( 10/12)
Yea I probably will, I can’t remember why I stopped reading you anyway…

Total points: ( 119/130)
This is your final score. No, it isn’t an even hundred.
Reviewed By: Helen