cookissuckis [June 15, 2005]

User:cookissuckis
Title: Star No Star


First Impression (5/5)
Emily the Strange! How I adore her. The black and red are great too. So far I like your layout very much.


Content (22/25)
Your writing style gives off the - “this is who I am and I’m not shy to show it” vibe. I like it. I don’t know what it is about diaries like this, but I enjoy reading them. You remind me a lot of my hyper days. lol. Again, a plus, because those are my best days! You are also a random writer. Sometimes this kind of writing messes with my head. I don’t really like being confused. I would also like to see you go more in-depth with your writing. However, your sarcasm and spontaneous attitude rocks. I like the fact that you joke around in your entries too. They aren’t too dramatic and/or emotional. Over all - nice job. Interesting read.


Layout & Colors (20/20)
You already know I love the colors. The gray meshes well too. What’s with everyone using my favorites? Hey, I’m not complaining... The layout is awesome. I’m quite the Emily fan myself. Did you know this as well? It’s almost as if you’ve redone your entire layout to please my eyes? Nah, it’s just coincidence is all. I like the image caption. “Star No Star” is a pretty awesome song. I see you’re a Jack off Jill fan too. Plus-Plus! I love that Emily Strange is listening to headphones while the layout is revolves around the song. I’d say Fallen Star did an excellent job on this one.

Navigation (10/10)
All the links work fine and everything seems to be well organized. I just love how the category boxes are perfectly aligned. I happen to be quite a perfectionist and things like that just set it off. Another thing I like is your “new” & “older” links, labeled *Fresh* & *Rotten*. I hate when people leave the boring link titles there. Thanks for sprucing them up.


Link (5/5)
You’ve posted payment, and on the front page. Thanks!


Grammar and Punctuation (11/15)
Well. I’m not exactly sure what to say. Most of your entries consist of just a few sentence. Sometimes you leave standard punctuation out and sometimes your grammar is off.

Extras (2/15)
You’ve posted a link to EmilyStrange.com, but that’s all.


Image? (+0/5)
I’m afraid not.


Creativity (6/8)
You contain creativity in your writing. The layout however, is rather unoriginal. I believe you to be the type of person that stands out. Your writing shows me that despite your layout, as much as I like it, you aren’t unoriginal. You posses tons of creativity in your vivid personality!


Contact (2/5)
Just email and AIM Screen name (profile).


Profile (6/10)
I don’t quite understand your profile title: The Unka formerly known as Junka's blog-z0rz. If I had to guess, I’d say it was an inside thing. Personally, I don’t like it. I would say it was best for the reader to be able to understand. Your profile description, aka short autobio is on track. It doesn’t tell me too much about you other than how you dress. But, that’s fine. It really doesn’t have to. I use lyrics in place of my personal information. You feature a few favorite diaries, our link included. Thanks again! Would that be considered a tip? You also include a nice amount of favorite music and movies, but lack any authors. I’m not going to hold it against you. I will say this; you have good taste in movies and music! SLC Punk, *good-good*


Will I Return? (11/12)
Oh yeah! We have tons in common and that’s usually what I go by as far as this section goes. I keep your writing in mind as well.

Total points: ( 100/130)

Reviewed By: Hayli

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