User: bratnatch
Title: paperback writer

First Impression (4/5)
I like the layout. It’s simple yet, pretty!

Content (25/25)
Your honest even when you shouldn’t be. By that I mean, you say you have a tendency to easily become embarrassed - yet to you that only matters to others and you post what you feel and you think about the consequences later. I like that. I too have that tendency. You say you’re not in touch with your feelings, in your fresh entry, however reading through your other entries I see differently. You have a quant way of expressing yourself. Even when your emotions are like razors and you seem hurt do you sound pleasant and at ease. How do you do this?

Layout & Colors (15/20)
The layout is nice, however I’d like to see more than just black text. Your layout is like a dull blanket on top of something with sparkle and potential for something great. The black outlined edge should at lest be in a brighter color. That would spark it up. I like the paperback writer theme.

Navigation (5/10)
The sub categories are nice, but they confused me a little. I’m not liking the fact that links aren’t titled to what pages the go to. For example: if it sends you to the profile, just label it *profile*. They show organization though and your links work well enough too.

Link (0/5)
Perhaps I have over looked it. But I don’t see it though.

Grammar and Punctuation (8/15)
You use standard grammar and punctuation.

Extras (10/15)
There are many. I’m not exactly sure what would be labeled and extra or not, but from what I’ve gathered up there are many.

Image? (+0/5)
none that I see.

Creativity (8/8)
You have and originality all your own.

Contact (3/5)
Guest book, notes, and livejournal.

Profile (10/10)
I didn’t find a link to your profile on your site. How inconvenient for the reader. Other than that, your title “and now for something completely different” described your diary completely. You are indeed different. That’s great. I also like your profile description; “two words: fuh reak”. It’s a simple short statement, but it’s entertaining. You have tons of favorites and a nice amount of comments to go along with them. Nice job.

Will I Return? (4/12)
Perhaps.

Total points: (92/130)

Reviewed By: Hayli