bolt-bandit [June 20, 2005]

User: bolt-bandit
Title: [x] just WATCH me


First Impression (1/5)
There’s too much going on for me to stay focused on one thing. I like the * fade to page* effect.


Content (25/25)
I loved the *to the Raven* poem. It’s hilarious. Quite catchy as well. I love your writing style. I have never seen anyone write like you. It’s refreshing really and humorous at times. You seem to have a broad mind and you express that with not a single lack of intelligence. You are straight to the point of every entry and to seem to be honest about how you feel. Most people are this way, only you express it much differently. It’s hard to explain, but you just have to trust me that I like it.

Layout & Colors (19/20)
I love the layout. The image is beautiful. I adore the how everything is set up.

Navigation (8/10)
The navigation seems to be organized, they all seem to work as well. I also like the hover element.

Link (5/5)
You’ve posted payment. Thanks!


Grammar and Punctuation (10/15)
You are aware of standard grammar and punctuation. That will suffice.

Extras (15/15)
You have plenty to choose from. I love that. Extras and images are my favorite thing about diaries! However, you didn’t post any pictures. I love that you adore music and that is actually shows. I love the scroll marquee of icons under your navigation. I hope you don’t mine if I use it as well. I’ve been looking for a quant way to post all of my icons without it being too obvious. Lol. The tagboard is nice too. The only thing I can’t quite understand is your sum41 poll. I don’t see how it fits in with your whole scene or if it really matters what people think of them. It just feels sort of random for it to be there. If you insist on posting the poll find a more suitable background that will blend better into the layout.


Image? (+0/5)
None that I have found.


Creativity (8/8)
Your layout is very creative. You are quite artistic. You seem to be really dedicated to what people think and the statement it gives off. I like that. You writing is very much original and refreshing to read. It keeps me interested.

Contact (3/5)
Email, guest book, and notes.


Profile (9/10)
Your profile title, “the most frequent thing I lose is interest” is interesting in itself. I like it. However, you failed to leave us with short autobio or even lyrics. I thought you would have posted lyrics for sure. You have an awesome amount of favorites. I love how you’ve posted quotes of your favorite movies. I haven’t seen that before and I never thought about it. Nice. Other than that your have a pretty standard profile. It’s organized and full. Good job.

Will I Return? (12/12)
Honestly, “hell yeah!” I love the content you seem to be an interesting person and I love your humor as well.

Total points: (115/130)

Reviewed By: Hayli

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