User: allicanbe
Title: they’re all worried about everyone else

First Impression (5/5)
I love the layout quote; “everybody thinks that everybody knows about everybody else, but nobody knows anything about themselves, because they’re all worried about everybody else.” If that isn’t the truth then we’re all liars.

Content (20/25)
You tend to daylog. That’s nothing to be ashamed of. I tend to fall off into that category at times. I wasn’t too keen about your particular writing style at first. However, I began to enjoy the visuals I got while reading and you make me think. You also help me to understand you on your level. (That wasn’t a smart remark) I tend to always think the same, well expecting the worst or trying too hard to understand. While reading your entries I found myself wondering about topics I normally don’t consider and my outlook on different issues broadened. Thanks...

Layout & Colors (17/20)
Like I said before, I love it. Call me your stereotypical hippie, but the yellow background reminds me of sunshine...lol. I love how it’s set up and the colors blend fabulously! I’d like to see more color to the scrollbar though.

Navigation (10/10)
I like that it’s clear though and the hover color and effect is nice as well. It’s seems to be organized in a standard, tasteful manner. From what I can see they all work fine too. Good job here.

Link (5/5)
You’ve posted payment, thanks!

Grammar and Punctuation (8/15)
I came across a few run-ons, but other than that you tend to use the standard punctuation and grammar required.

Extras (7/15)

pictures and reviews. Not too many to choose from is there? At least you have what you have and that counts for something.

Image? (+5/5)
You have posted many pictures, however they are all too large and bulky. I would prefer them be placed as thumbnails or registered under an online photo album for organization. It shall suffice. You seem like quite a character and Jen is gorgeous. : )

Creativity (6/8)
You make me laugh! I love it. Awesome personality! You remind me of a good friend of mine. I’d say you have “class” and “creativity” - lol. Great job.

Contact (3/5)
Two email addresses and notes. Far enough.

Profile (10/10)
You title is simple and to the point, however boring: Brads Diary. Ponder that. Your description shows your likes and dislikes. I believe this to be the best method to helping others get to know you. I must say, you don’t look 16, but you tend to act a bit younger, lol. It’s all in the fun, I say. You have a wide variety of favorites diaries and other favorites, with many comments to match. Nice.

Will I Return? (10/12)
Sure, I enjoyed it!

Total points: ( 101+5=106 /130)

Reviewed By: Hayli