lplover84's [July 11, 2005]

User: lplover84.diaryland.com

Title: ...the repetitive & characterless life of chelsea.


First Impression (4/5)
i really like the picture on your layout..kinda punkrockish but not in the annoying way.its a little hard to read your bio only cus im blind

Content (15/25)
its just not my thing..its like reading a list of things you do."i did this than i did this and ..." you do add some feeling and emotions.im just a raw kind of person i like passion

Layout & Colors (18/20)
its good without blinding me with color but the white at the bottom is kinda dull..i myself like layouts of a solid color other than white maybe make the words a little bigger or bolder again im blind

Navigation (10/10)
i found everything perfectly

Link (5/5)
good job on linking back to us

Grammar and Punctuation (15/15)
incredible but hey i dont even know what punctuation is ..if youve ever read my diary..you rock at it though

Extras (13/15)
you have the extras page and everything is nice and neat .go you. one of your links wasnt working though

Image? (/5)
i think it was your image link that wasnt working

Creativity (7/8)
didnt see anything that struck my fancy
i think i liked your 100 list though..wait and the shoot thebunny thing
Contact (5/5)
email is good good good good

Profile (5/10)
you sure do <3 alot..i thought it was a little too much though and didnt really show the readers anything about why you like those bands other than you <3 them at least with the movies you said what you like about them..im just a simple gal myself

Will I Return? (8/12)
.depends..and if you thought i was unfair or didnt like your review im sure you can have someone else do it..im kinda picky about some stuff but other than that you have a good well layed out diary ..kudos..


Total points: (90 /130)

Reviewed By: Renee'


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